Agree with the two upstairs

The full BL version of a slight smile is very alluring

I also have an inexplicable irritability about the "..." at the end of each chapter

I feel that this kind of plot is more feasible for the BG version.

In the BL version, there are really too many places that will be criticized. The plot can go so smoothly and so warmly. really feel that Jack Su has reached the extreme, and can't have a sense of identity at all.

In addition to the above points, if you have seen Wei Wei, you will feel that every time Gong slaps the face is very unpleasant (it should be said that the itch can't be scratched)

Example 1. Xiaojiao is very obedient and insists on approaching her like a madman (meaning that I suspect that Xiaoguo's very good age is set to be under 14 years old, which is too maddened), attacking her: self-indulgent. then go

Hello? It's better to take the phrase "Who is she?" from the secret chat.

Example 2. When Fan Jiayue was chatting secretly, she attacked her back: "unless you can talk to me, maybe I will take care of you" and so on.

Maybe the author wants to express the aggressiveness of the attack. I will only listen to what my man says in the world, and you are not worthy of it?

But I seriously feel that this sentence is like saying to Fan, if you want me to agree to this, please feel free to harass/threate my lover, so that I may agree?

I’ve read the comments below the profile before. The people at Katino are still very honest. This time also read a lot of positive reviews, so clicked to check it out... saw half of the abandoned articles. Thank you for sharing.