◎The writing collapsed?◎

In October, the autumn was crisp, and Yu Gesang completed the first monthly exam for the third year of junior high school. The results were sent out, and he was among the top two in the class, with full marks in arithmetic and close to full marks in writing. Ten points were deducted for Chinese.The sub-courses that the original principal chose were agronomy and chess, which could only be changed once a school year, and Yu Gesang happened to be not that good at them (fortunately, they only accounted for 30% of the test score).

But this grade can prove herself very well. Others no longer think that her top three grades in the last semester were cheating or fluke, but the truth. In this way, everyone's impression of her as a scumbag has been replaced with a top grader.

However, the reputation of Xueba has brought more people close to her. Perhaps compared to a book that sells well in the whole province, the status of a newcomer author promoted by the government, the status of Xueba makes the group of students in the college who have not yet left the society more attractive.Feel amiable.

But Mr. Zhangjiao—especially Mr. Zhangjiao in the writing class is quite fond of her authorship.

She is Mr. Qiu Hongmian, who took Mr. Zhou's writing class after returning to the college after his internship. She also had a dream of writing when she was a young girl, but the frequent rejection of manuscripts made her realize that she didn't have the talent, but she still loved writing.□Devoted to the education industry, teaching students to write.

The writing ability is not as good as that of Mr. Zhou, but it is not a problem to be a teacher in this small town academy. He is very enthusiastic and treats students well, especially those who are good at writing. After Mr. Zhou was transferred, she relied on pestering peopleThe writing teacher who won class A with his skills and the status of a relative of the college leader, the whole school knows his preference for Yu Gesang.

For other students, Qiu Zhangjiao said, "The writing here is good, but it can be revised", "I think there is a little problem with this place, and it may be better to change it to this description."

Then for Yu Gesang, "Wow, Sang Sang's writing is really good, it's perfect, students, come and listen to how our classmate Sang describes autumn..." There are one set of beautiful words.

She is already the mother of two children, but when she blows rainbow farts, it makes people feel cute like a girl.

Therefore, Yu Gesang quite liked this teacher, and other students in the class would not think her bad.

Because although she is partial to Yu Gesang, she will not belittle other students, and she will praise the students occasionally as if they are in a surprise.

Such a teacher is really annoying.

For the students, such encouraging teaching may enhance their confidence and let their imagination fly.

But no matter how much Yu Gesang likes Master Qiu, he will not tell her that she wrote "The Elder Xiuxian He Relyed on Farming to Live the Tribulation" that he is reading recently.

Yes, Yu Gesang's new book has started to be serialized in the daily "Acacia" this month. On the first day of the daily serialization, Master Qiu shared it with her.

"Sang Sang, take a look at this novel. This part has the feeling of your "Mu Jiu".I have a deep understanding of the world of cultivating immortals. I have learned so much from you these days, and I am not as close to you as I wrote in the opening chapter of this novel!"

Qiu Zhangjiao is also a senior reader of "Mu Jiu". When "Mu Jiu" was still being serialized, she had the cheek to try to use Yu Youwen to come to Yu Gesang to remind him to update it.

Later, after the end of "Mu Jiu", heard that her crying frightened the whole neighborhood and neighbors, and they were heart-piercing, thinking that some tragedy had happened.

In short, she just likes "Mu Jiu" very much, and once wanted to see her write the follow-up of "Mu Jiu". It is a pity to confirm that Yu Gesang will not write it. Fortunately, Yu Gesang soon opened up the theme of fairy tale cultivation, Zhuxian Province's novels on this subject have sprung up, so she won't have nothing to read.

Some of the writing is indeed not bad, and can attract people to read, but the traces of imitating "Mu Jiu" are still very heavy, not plagiarism, but a kind of following the trend.

Like sadomasochism between master and apprentice, don't know how many have been written.

It’s just that maybe I’m new to this subject matter, even if I try to incorporate my imagination of the world of cultivating immortals into the text, the writing is not natural enough, making people feel that this is a "hair-headed boy" who hasn't really learned "Kung Fu".

However, the novel "The Elder Cultivation of Immortals Relying on Farming to Experience Tribulations" does not make people feel this way. The author writes about the protagonist's sect, the protagonist's spiritual power, and the news about the world of immortality.Going in the novel will not make people feel like a play.

It can be seen from this that this is an author who has learned the theme of "Xian Xia Cultivation"!

Not to mention how excited Qiu Zhangjiao, a senior lover of the theme of Xianxia Cultivation, thought she was about to eat a delicious meal, she was ready to read with great interest——Hey, where's my big meal?What about my delicious Xianxia Cultivation Text?Why did he suddenly become a mortal?

Qiu Zhangjiao does not believe in evil. After waiting for several days, the protagonist is still in the mortal world. Although she used spiritual power to bring the mustard space, it is not at all the same as the grand and majestic love-hate love-hate novel she imagined., It doesn't feel like "Mu Jiu" at all, bad review!

So in the next few days she said to Yu Gesang, "Sang Sang, I read it, and there is no fairy tale cultivation novel on the market that can surpass your "Mu Jiu".Selling dog meat with a sheep's head, I guess I just learned from your superficiality, afraid of being exposed, so I will only write about the mortal things in the future.

Don't worry, calm down, and when you write Xianxia Cultivation, you will definitely be better than others. Don't believe those people's bitter words. Writing can be written as you say, and it's not buying Chinese cabbage."

I don’t know if I really don’t like "The Elders of Cultivation of Immortals", or because some people say that Yu Gesang has not published a novel for so long in the past, that he is "exhausted" and will never produce good articles, so I specifically said it to comfort her,Make it easy for her.

However, one thing is true, the data of "The Elder Xiuxian" is really inferior to that of "Mu Jiu".

Xu Wanyan frowned slightly as she watched the sales growth of the daily newspaper since the release of "The Elder Xiuxian He Relyed on Farming" and the situation of letters from readers, "If you hadn't changed your pseudonym, the situation might have been better."

"Elder Cultivation of Immortals", is it broken?

The author has something to say:

——Today is really busy, a lot of things are mixed together, I didn't want to change it at first, because it was almost early morning when I was free to wait for me, but seeing so many lovely and kind fairies don't force me to change it every day.That's good, I gritted my teeth and wrote it again, after all, it is my responsibility to protect the kindness of the fairy hahaha

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