Chapter 58

[Wen Suning]: I couldn't think of anything, so I just stopped writing.

[Mu Yunsheng]: How come you can't think of something?What happened to Zheng Hong in the business field next time, did he find any new antiques, all of these can be written!

[Wen Suning]: I feel like I’m going to write about those things again. All the fresh plots I can think of so far are in the main text.

[Mu Yunsheng]: Hey, it seems to be the same.I'm so sorry, the article I've been chasing for more than three months has ended like this.

[Wen Suning]: No, you still have to prepare for a few months of web dramas.

[Mu Yunsheng]: Already casting actors, how is your script doing?

[Wen Suning]: I'm watching it now, and it's pretty good.

[Mu Yunsheng]: That is, my only requirement is to keep the original flavor as much as possible. Thanks to you, you didn’t write anything too outrageous. After removing the system, the logic is completely fine.

Suddenly there was no need for code words, and Wen Suning still felt a little flustered. He made some revisions to the first draft of the script, poured a glass of water, and started to read the audiobook.

When he read at half past ten, he stopped dryly and couldn't help thinking about the second book.

His comfort zone is in the business world, but purely realistic business war themes rarely have a market on Qicheng.com, so he must write while taking into account the commercial nature.

Wen Suning opened the codeword, opened the document of the new book, and pondered over the settings.

Fantasy themes will always take up the bulk, and he has to work hard in this direction.

Wen Suning browsed the list on the website, and suddenly came up with an idea.

He has read a few cyberpunk novels these days, most of which are protagonists with miserable identities growing up from the lowest position step by step, leading people to fight against the monopoly chaebol Su Shuang.

In the cyberpunk world view of the battle drama, the world is ruled by giant monopoly companies, and the future fate of small and medium-sized enterprises is nothing but bankruptcy or acquisition. It is almost impossible to get a chance to survive.

It would be great if the protagonist could engage in business warfare in such a difficult situation.

And because it is an overhead world, relevant laws and regulations can be written by themselves, and some private settings can be made.

As for the setting of the protagonist, Wen Suning intends to make it a pure human being. Because he has not installed a prosthetic body or modified it, his physical condition is worrying, but he is extremely intelligent.

You have to fight your brains with others, but they may want to shoot you down. In the real world, business wars are transformed into offline physical fights everywhere, let alone a future world with chaotic laws and thin morals.

Therefore, the protagonist needs an existence with powerful force as a helper. It doesn't have to be a human being. It's a sci-fi world anyway, and it can be set to any race.

Wen Suning was initially set as the robot that the protagonist picked up at the garbage dump. Because of the loss of the memory module, he forgot the past and has been faithfully accompanying the protagonist.

He can arrange a more powerful life experience for the robot, and bury clues. Of course, in order to avoid routines, this life experience cannot be the best robot developed by a monopoly company that ends up on the street by accident.

Ah, it's hard to imagine.

Wen Suning slowly tapped on the world view, organizational power, economic and cultural level, terrain distribution, natural landscape, and the bifurcation of the technology tree, all of which must at least make a rough outline, or wait until the text is written to make up for it, and it is easy to appear before and after.A paradoxical situation of conflict.

He fumbled slowly for more than an hour, and came up with hundreds of words of settings.

It is mainly the setting of the protagonist and the robot supporting role, especially the robot supporting role. The robot has no gender, but in order to look closer to people, it will have a corresponding appearance.

Wen Suning thought over and over again, worried that she would write a shit-like emotional scene.

When he reads novels, he can tell if other authors' emotional dramas are good or bad, but when it's his turn, he doesn't know what to do, so he just sets the appearance and gender of the robot companion to male.

At 11:30, Wen Suning went to the cafeteria to eat, specially avoiding the roommates of the military training students. At this point, the senior students had not finished class, and there were not many people in the cafeteria. When Wen Suning finished eating, the big troops just swarmed in.

In the afternoon, he left the school gate to find Mu Yunsheng to exercise, and at the same time asked him his opinion on the setting of the new article.

Mu Yunsheng clapped his hands and praised: "The male robot is also very good. I am reading a book on the way. Many authors write that the brotherhood is more touching than the love with the heroine, and the male robot can also change parts."

Wen Suning: "?"

Is that what he meant?

After Mu Yunsheng finished speaking, he realized that he seemed to be talking about tigers and wolves. He immediately fell silent and observed Wen Suning's expression.

Probably didn't hear it?

"Then we have to have a heroine." Wen Suning pretended nothing happened, and continued, "Maybe we can treat the heroine as an important teammate, and then slowly develop love over time?"

Mu Yunsheng scratched his head: "It's all right, you can ask other author friends? Or you can ask Yan Chengke, she likes to read romance novels, so she should be able to provide more suggestions."

Makes sense.

Wen Suning decided to consult Yuyu and Yan Chengke for their opinions.

Yuyu directly sent him a document, which contained all kinds of emotional dry goods in the female channel, the portrayal of the active side, ambiguous interaction, teardrop output, how to make sweet texts not awkward, dialogue tips, sense of substitution, abusePoints, how to enrich the plot while advancing the relationship, etc.

[Yuyu]: After researching all these, I think you will be able to write it, goddammit!

[Su Ning]: ... ... Good.

Wen Suning flipped through the 200-page document and decided to print it out and study it carefully.

Accompanied by Mu Yunsheng, he came to the printing shop, and Mu Yunsheng also took a look at the content of the printed document by the way.

According to the document, when the hero and heroine appear together, they must have more physical interactions, and must not just talk dryly. Many key plots require physical interaction to trigger, and this kind of interaction must be well grasped, otherwise it will be greasy.

Mu Yunsheng pondered, what is the degree of interaction?

Is the physical contact between him and Wen Suning's fitness considered an effective contact?He often touches Wen Suning to see if the muscle force is correct. Could it be greasy?

Mu Yunsheng's brain was spinning rapidly, and he felt that he had touched some kind of new unknown territory.

So there are so many tricks in a relationship?

"Is it really necessary to do this?" Mu Yunsheng asked, "It's impossible for all authors to study this method when they write?"

"It is really unnecessary for the author who can write it by himself. They have their own set of ideas, just like I haven't studied how to write the plot. Writing Jianbao basically arranges the content based on intuition. You don't have to do too much.Think more, and the words can be typed out naturally like flowing water."

Wen Suning explained, "But for those who can't write, they can only use skills to make up for the lack of inspiration. Yuyu sent me these documents, but she has never read them herself."

Mu Yunsheng understood.

It probably means that it is not difficult for those who meet, but not for those who are difficult.

The "teaching material" has been printed on both sides in a thick volume, and it is quite reassuring to hold it in your hand. Wen Suning plans to spend two days researching it thoroughly, hoping to help her follow-up relationship arrangements.

Mu Yunsheng glanced at the time, it was only nine o'clock, two hours before Wen Suning's usual rest.

"Are you going to school tonight?"

Wen Suning thought for a while: "I'll go home and sleep, I can just take a bath."

Mu Yunsheng: "Then why don't we watch some well-known romance movies to find out how we feel?"

"Okay, you choose the movie." Wen Suning sat in the co-pilot and chatted with Yan Chengke.

Another staff officer, Yan Chengke, said that when she reads male dramas, she can accept them as long as the male lead doesn’t engage in the harem, and the plots and descriptions don’t seriously discriminate against women.Under the edification was pulled down.

Wen Suning wants to pursue better, of course it is a good thing, she shared a few steps of her favorite romance novels for Wen Suning to study.

Among them are two ancient romances, one modern city and one fantasy romance.

The number of words is basically between 300,000 and 500,000 words, and a book can be read in half a day at a fast speed.

Wen Suning thanked her, and Yan Chengke asked Wen Suning how she felt during the past few days at school.

[Wen Suning]: The formal classes haven't started yet, and the military training won't end until the day after tomorrow. I may have less time then, so I have to hurry up and study it.

[Yan Chengke]: Well, today I got the script from the director, if there is something difficult to understand, can I ask you?

As an actor, good acting skills are not enough, and it is equally important to figure out the script.Yan Chengke felt that since Wen Suning could write such an excellent novel, she must have an advantage in terms of plot perception.

[Wen Suning]: Alright, if I can help, I will definitely help.

Yan Chengke roughly told Wen Suning about the content of the script.

The play directed by Zhuo Jian is an original script, an idol drama in ancient costume dressed in a scheming cloak.

The heroine Yan Chengke will play is a peasant girl. Later, because her mother was seriously ill due to a poor family, she went to the Hou Mansion to work as a maid in order to make money, and occasionally helped in the kitchen, showing off her good cooking skills.

Because of this, the heroine was appreciated by the Hou Mansion and became a cook. She studied various cuisines every day. Later, the Queen Mother lost her appetite due to illness, so the Hou Mansion took the opportunity to send the heroine to the palace.The kitchen of the mansion has become the most noble imperial dining room.

Don't think about it, the hero must be some kind of prince, senior official and general.

Yan Chengke has carefully studied the script, and the heroine is well-deserved. All the key plots and turning points in the play revolve around her.

But it's not like the heroine is cutting vegetables and melons with a kitchen knife to upgrade all the way. In many cases, she has to rely on the help of men to get through the crisis. After all, it is an idol drama, and the hero must be given some opportunities to perform.

Yan Chengke wondered how the not-so-good heroine should feel when she was sent to the palace by the Marquis.

Since she became a cook, she has been treated kindly by the masters of the Hou Mansion because of the delicious cooking, so much so that she regards the Hou Mansion as her other home.

But Lord Hou sent her directly to the palace with just one sentence.

The hostess should be happy that she can enter the palace, because this is a proper promotion and salary increase.

But as soon as you enter the palace gate, it is as deep as the sea. The palace is not so easy to live in. Even if you only work in the imperial dining room, you are not guaranteed to encounter all kinds of strange dangers.

Moreover, he must feel sad when he was sent away by the masters of the Hou Mansion.

You must know that the heroine just wanted to earn some monthly support for the family at the beginning, and never had any lofty ideals and ambitions. After entering the palace, she seldom goes out at any time, let alone go back to her hometown to see her parents.

But for any normal person, being able to make more money with their own abilities is definitely a great thing.

These emotions were mixed and conflicted with each other, which made Yan Chengke not quite clear.

Wen Suning pondered for a while, and roughly talked about her own understanding.

[Wen Suning]: It's quite complicated, but the characters change. It doesn't mean that what she does at the beginning of the story will always be the same in the follow-up.

For example, the heroine didn't have much ambition at first, and just wanted to make some money with her skills.But during these days in the Hou Mansion, she realized that her ability and level belonged to the best, and she got along well with her masters, so her cognition should also undergo some changes, thinking about whether she could do more.

She has been working in the Hou's Mansion for more than a year. Because she cooks well, she is often rewarded. In addition to the monthly payment, the money she has saved is enough for the family to live comfortably for several years.If you choose to enter the palace, you will not have much family burden.

And in the imperial dining room, the hostess can meet the best cooks in the world, and learn from them to improve.

[Yan Chengke]: That is to say, when she enters the palace, the heroine's career will have the upper hand, I understand.

[Wen Suning]: My personal understanding is this. The specifics have to be analyzed according to the details of the previous plot. You slowly figure it out and try to find a sense of substitution.

In fact, it may be a bit difficult for Yan Chengke to be the heroine. She has no worries about food and clothing since she was a child, and it is difficult to properly understand how the heroine gradually changed from worrying about livelihood to pursuing spiritual goals.

Wen Suning thought about it and gave her an idea.

[Wen Suning]: How about it, you can try it in a few days, how can you spend half a month with 600 yuan.

[Yan Chengke]: Six hundred yuan?sure.

Wen Suning specifically added: You can't use the membership card or point card you bought before, and you can't use things bought by others. You have to spend your own money for food, drink and travel.

[Yan Chengke]: Huh?How can that be!

Damn, she originally thought that there were more than 10,000 yuan in the beauty card, 3,000 yuan in the supermarket, and there were cards for everything in the subway and bus.

If you can't spend it in the end...it feels like you will eat dirt in less than a week.

[Wen Suning]: You have a lot of daily necessities at home, you can also eat at home, and you don’t need to rent a house. It’s enough, you have a try.

[Yan Chengke]: All right, I will work hard.

She calculated, 600 yuan for half a month, equivalent to only spending 40 yuan a day.

You can't ask others to buy what you want.

Just do what she said, Yan Chengke took a screenshot of her debit card balance and saved it in the photo album to facilitate the calculation of expenses.

Mu Yunsheng stopped the car at this time, and looked at Wen Suning curiously: "What are you talking about?"

"Talked with Yan Chengke about her script." Wen Suning put away her phone, "I asked her to challenge 600 yuan for half a month, to experience what it's like to be a poor heroine."

Mu Yunsheng: "Good guy, sometimes it's gone after 600 yuan for a meal, and it's hell mode when you come up."

The two went upstairs, while driving, Mu Yunsheng had already thought about tonight's movie.

Pure romance films are a bit uninteresting, and the highlights are mixed with other elements. It just so happens that Wen Suning's next book will also write fantasy themes.

Mu Yunsheng chose "The Shape of Water". This film won the Golden Lion Award at the 74th Venice Film Festival and the best film at the 90th Academy Awards, but the global box office is only 200 million US dollars, which is relatively small..

The story took place in the 1960s during the Cold War period. The heroine is a mute woman who works as a cleaner in a secret base in the United States. When she was cleaning the blood on the base, she accidentally discovered the murloc being imprisoned for research, but she was not afraid of this strange and weird creature.creature, instead giving it an egg to eat.

The whole film presents a dark black and green tone, which looks extraordinarily cold.

Wen Suning is sitting on the sofa, watching xp with Mu Yunsheng. The amazing heroine, with the help of Dr. Soviet Union, cleaning friends and neighbors, steals the murlocs out of the base, raises them in her own home, and gets along with them every day.A cross-species love develops in it.

In fact, this kind of sticky aquatic creature would make people instinctively disgusting, but maybe after watching it for a long time, Wen Suning gradually felt that the male murloc is quite cute, and many shots have a doomsday-like lookbeautiful.

The heroine can't speak, and one person and one fish can only communicate through body language.

Later, the hostess was asked by the person in charge of the laboratory whether the three slanted scars on her neck were the cause of her loss of voice. The hostess shook her head, and the cleaning friend answered for her that it was present at birth.

Wen Suning said suddenly: "The heroine should not be human."

Mu Yunsheng: "Huh?"

Wen Suning: "The three scars on her neck are very similar to the murloc's closed gills, and there was a scene before, did you notice that she can control the raindrops on the car window."

Mu Yunsheng was stunned: "That is to say, she is the same race as the hero?"

Wen Suning: "It should be, maybe it's an underdeveloped individual? Do you know the Cthulhu myth?"

Mu Yunsheng: "Of course I know, whoever reads novels doesn't know about Cthulhu."

Wen Suning: "Howard mentioned a creature in "The Shadow of Innsmouth". Its body is grayish green, mostly smooth, with scales on its back and gills on both sides of its neck."

Mu Yunsheng: "Deep diver!"

Wen Suning nodded: "Well, deep divers can give birth to hybrid offspring with humans, and the hybrid children will be fully human for a period of time, and will transform into amphibians later."

Hearing what Wen Suning said, Mu Yunsheng suddenly felt that it made sense.

That's right, which normal person would be so amazing with xp? The murloc in the film is not the mermaid with beautiful appearance and melodious voice in fantasy. If the two are actually of the same race, many things can be explained clearly.

After learning about the love between the dumb girl and the murloc, the cleaning friend was stunned. She quietly asked the dumb girl how to grow up in love with the murloc, and then the dumb girl gestured to her to describe the murloc.How does that part stick out.

Seeing the thunderous expression of the cleaning friend, Wen Su Ning was overjoyed.

Mu Yunsheng's face was hot, but fortunately he and Wen Suning had seen many adult scenes together, so he could barely maintain his composure.

He also thought of the supporting role of the robot that Wen Suning planned to set up in the new article, in fact, it seems that similar functions can also be used on it... Wait, what are you thinking about!

The movie was 123 minutes long, and it was just after eleven o'clock when they finished watching.

In the end, it was a pretty good ending. Only the world where the Soviet doctor was injured was achieved. The plot is also very simple, and it can be described in one sentence, but it won the Oscar of the year.

Wen Suning can probably understand that the reason for the award is related to politics. The heroine is disabled, the friend is black, the neighbor is gay, and the murloc is an alien species. In the end, they worked together to defeat the power and oppression of white male representatives.

Very politically correct, but he does not reject political correctness in this form.

In the same way, if you want to promote a certain idea in a novel, it is best to use it in a subtle way. If you directly use the character's mouth or use large paragraphs of narration to explain it, it will only bring a strong sense of preaching.People can feel the father's smell coming to their faces.

Wen Suning pondered this art of expression, and also understood why the two novels he had read recently showed a good theme, but they made people feel bored after reading them.

"I'm going back, do you still have to take a shower?" Mu Yunsheng stood up and stretched.

"I just took a rest after washing. I don't need to write codes now, so I can sleep late." Wen Suning sent him to the door, "I'm not used to suddenly being idle."

"At this time, I will urge the second child hard." Mu Yunsheng said with a smile, "Then I'm leaving, bye."

Wen Suning lay on the bed after washing, and suddenly had an idea.

Can he combine cyberpunk and Cthulhu?

There is a very famous Chinese-style Cthulhu Immortal Essay on the website, which is very tasteful, and Wen Suning is now chasing updates every day.

It just so happens that grams are quite popular elements, as long as they don't make them particularly bloody and heavy grams, there is a market for them.

The family of the monopoly chaebol is actually a creature from an alien world. The prosthetic body implanted by people is metal on the surface, but it is actually a strip of parasites. When most parts of the body are replaced by prosthetic bodies, people will be completely dominated by parasites, thusTransformed into an alien family?

Wen Suning had a vague idea in his mind, he let his thoughts wander and fell asleep.

Perhaps it was because she thought about too many related elements before going to bed, Wen Suning had a chaotic dream.

In the dream, as a member of the management team, he was admired and appreciated by the board of directors because he defeated his opponent in the business strife. He was taking the elevator all the way to the top of the group to meet the most mysterious board of directors.

The elevator finally stopped on the top floor. Wen Suning stepped out of the elevator and found that the surroundings were eerily quiet. There were no guides, and even the artificial intelligence assistant stopped working.

It was pitch black ahead, only countless thick black wires wrapped around the walls, floor and ceiling, extending to the end.

Wen Suling smelled a strong stench.

He moved forward tentatively, stepped over the protruding and twisted electric wires, turned on the flashlight, and suddenly found that the surroundings were all wrapped in flesh and blood, and the red and white texture was still jumping up and down.

He raised his head, and there were drop-shaped sarcoid tumors hanging from the ceiling that was also attached to soft flesh and blood. The slender flesh and blood tissue hung down extremely long, as if it would break in the next second.

And the sarcoma was stretched so huge that the surface was even translucent, revealing the eyeballs inside. At this moment, those pupils of different colors were staring at him closely, and their inorganic eyes were full of indifference.

Wen Suning suddenly realized that they were members of the board of directors.

And he will also be absorbed into one of them.

Wen Suning forgot how he responded in the dream.

The moment he opened his eyes, he immediately touched his phone to open the memo, and quickly recorded the things he hadn't forgotten.

Flesh technology is also an element that can be considered. Of course, the scale must be grasped. Moderate novelty hunting can attract readers who like many thrills, but excessive novelty hunting can easily play a dissuading role.

But it's not sure, if it's particularly fresh, it might be used as a gimmick to achieve the effect of getting out of the circle.

Wen Suning lay on the bed and thought about it for a while, then got up and continued to make settings and outlines.